ext_30932 ([identity profile] dreamincolor.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deird_lj 2008-07-01 09:05 am (UTC)

Very nice.

It’s going to land on Oz again – of course it will, he’s her boyfriend after all – but she knows that already. So there’s no harm in just checking.

Great use of metaphor - it just fits so perfectly. The way Willow convinced herself that it wasn't her fault and it wasn't on purpose, and that she won't do it again was spot on for her at that time.

Great work hon!

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