Great fic! I can't understard how I missed it when you posted it. Usually I'm not a big fan of the second-person narrative, but you nailed it beautifully. I was intrigued from the very first line and kept guessing what the hell is happening almost till the end. And - the payoff was fantastic! I love how you juggled realities and created a new one. Filigree job.
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Usually I'm not a big fan of the second-person narrative, but you nailed it beautifully. I was intrigued from the very first line and kept guessing what the hell is happening almost till the end. And - the payoff was fantastic! I love how you juggled realities and created a new one. Filigree job.