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deird_lj ([personal profile] deird_lj) wrote2010-04-06 05:20 pm
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Not Much Left

Here's a teeny ficlet (so small it's almost a drabble), for [livejournal.com profile] still_grrr's Characters Of Colour month.

It's about Robin.




Not Much Left

In his memory his mother is
a soothing smile
a long black coat
cheese sandwiches
and him in red pyjamas on her lap.

She gave him coloured building blocks
and got home late.

She told him to be strong.

These bits are stacked together in his memory
building a shape that means
comfort
home
and a time before he found out the world was bad.

He used to build her towers out of just the yellow blocks
because they were the best
and he would show her when she got home
if he was still awake.

In Sunnydale
one day
the vampire puts on a long black coat
and walks out to kill again.

And suddenly
the blocks come crashing down
and one of those memories
does not mean his mother anymore.

ruuger: My hand with the nails painted red and black resting on the keyboard of my laptop (Ladykiller)

[personal profile] ruuger 2010-04-06 10:10 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, this was very good.

[identity profile] slaymesoftly.livejournal.com 2010-04-06 11:30 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice. It makes me sad for Robin. Well done!
quinara: Buffy looks up with a bloom of yellow sparklies behind her. (Buffy sparkles)

[personal profile] quinara 2010-04-06 11:43 am (UTC)(link)
Gah, this is wonderful.
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[identity profile] moscow-watcher.livejournal.com 2010-04-06 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
You made me feel for Robin.

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2010-04-06 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I love the structure here. Very powerful.
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[identity profile] lavastar.livejournal.com 2010-04-07 12:44 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, that's just perfect. I love the structure and bittersweetness.