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deird_lj ([personal profile] deird_lj) wrote2010-04-16 09:22 am

Weird Punctuation Decisions

I’ve been corrected in the comments to my last post for pluralising “Mary-Sue” incorrectly.

And while part of me wants to wave my editing course in people’s faces and go “I know better than anyone! Hah!” and another part of me wants to change it so that people won’t think I am bad at punctuation, I thought it might be more interesting to make a post about it – because I’m obsessed with language, and find this stuff far too fascinating.


Yes, I did check my textbooks before posting. And they… disagreed.

Let’s look at a boring and normal name.

Mark

Original word: Mark
Possessive form: Mark’s (as in “This is Mark’s hat.”)
Plural form: well, it’d be “Marks”, right? After all, simple English plurals are made by sticking an S on the end – that’s really all that has to be done.

Which would be all well and good – if all names were names like Mark, Luke, and Katherine.


However…

Louis

This one already has enough debate over the possessive form. (Is it “Louis’s hat”, or “Louis’ hat”? No-one’s quite sure.) Add in the possibility of more than one Louis, and there’s a whole new issue.

If there are five people called Louis in one room, are they the “five Louis”, or “five Louises”, or “five Louiss”?


Buffy

If Buffy clones herself, are there “two Buffys”, or “two Buffies”?
(Jane Espenson prefers Buffies.)


Henry

Has England had “eight King Henrys”, “eight King Henries”, or “eight Kings Henry”?



My textbooks disagree. One recommends a different style for each name – “Marks”, “Louis’s”, “Buffys”, and “Kings Henry”, respectively – one says “do whatever you want, just be consistent”, and one says to use apostrophes: “three Mark’s, five Louis’s, two Buffy’s, and eight King Henry’s”.

I decided to go the apostrophe-adding route, even though I knew it would look like I was mixing it up with possessives.




So: was I right? Or wrong? Or should I have done something completely different?
Tell me in the comments!
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[identity profile] kitty-poker1.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
I attempted to address this question some years ago in an essay on betaing, and struck the same problem.

My bible is The Blue Book of Grammar and Punctuation but English is a living language and things change, damn it. *g*
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[personal profile] deird1 2010-04-16 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh... Links...


It really is ridiculous. My editing class got into a discussion about "Louis' hat" versus "Louis's hat", got so passionate about it that there was soon shouting from both sides of the debate - and half an hour later we still didn't have an answer.

(Personally, I'd say that the S in "Louis" is unpronounced, and when you're talking about something he owns you're pronouncing an S - so clearly it should be "Louis's hat" with the first S silent... but a lot of my classmates are convinced I'm wrong.)
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[identity profile] kitty-poker1.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, first bit in the apostrophe bit of my essay because it's so contentious!

I couldn't leave this section without mentioning the humble apostrophe. Not so humble, actually, because correct usage is essential for clarity. They're used primarily to form the possessive of a noun:

• add 's to the singular form of a word (even if it ends in -s):
the owner's car
James's hat


...was the advice I parroted, then had to concede the point to a commenter that James' hat (or Louis' hat) was equally clear. I stand by Louis's hat, whether or not the -s is silent, though, as correct, very strictly speaking.

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
Louis is America still pronounces the 'S'. It's silent in Australia the way it is in France?

We say "Loo-is" compared to the "Loo-ee". So I've always done the apostrophe for words ending in S.

For instance, whenever I use the possessive form with Joss' name, I don't add an additional S. It's less to me about if the S is silent, but if there's an S at all. I remember learning that in grammar school and it always stuck.
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[personal profile] deird1 2010-04-16 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
I know people called "Louis" (silent S) and also "Lewis" (pronounced S).

But our discussion was specifically discussing King Louis of France.

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
I know people called "Louis" (silent S) and also "Lewis" (pronounced S).

Over yonder, both pronounce the S. The best example would be the capitol St. Louis. Still pronounced with the S. Though when talking about historical figures, then yeah I'd pronounce King Louis of France where the S is silent.

Maybe it's just me, but I'd always thought the rule where you drop the S here--instead of Joss's, you'd do Joss'--isn't related to pronunciation. It will still be said aloud 'Jossis', right? But that it reads as less ungainly without the extra S clogging up the works.
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[personal profile] deird1 2010-04-16 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
My style guide offers two alternatives:

1 (the modern style): Put an S on the end of all of them, no matter what - "Buffy's hat", "Giles's hat" - except when they're an old historical or mythological figure - "Archimedes' hat".

2 (the traditional style): Leave out the S from names that end in S - "Giles' hat" - unless you judge that the pronunciation would emphasise both S's - "Joss's writing".



In this case, Joss is both a modern-day guy, and someone with the double-S pronunciation - so it would usually be "Joss's".
Edited 2010-04-16 02:34 (UTC)

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
2 (the traditional style): Leave out the S from names that end in S - "Giles' hat" - unless you judge that the pronunciation would emphasise both S's - "Joss's writing".

See, I'd still pronounce "Giles'" with a double pronunciation of S. Every name I can think of that ends in an S, when made possessive would have a double S pronunciation. So I'm kinda looking squinty-eyed at the second rule. Archimedes' owl: double S. Phyllis' cow: double S. The only name I can think of that doesn't have the double S pronunciation is King Louis, as per your example above. And that's only when we Americans acknowledge the French pronunciation. Ex.: St. Louis' transit system is a mess. Double pronunciation of S.

It seems to me that basing the written rule on vocal pronunciation gets dodgy when quote-unquote English is pronounced so differently on three different continents. And that's before considering the vast variation within the same continent. And that old historical or mythological figures shouldn't get an extra S? That seems like a bizarre reason for grammar to me. At what point is a historical figure old enough to not be weighted down by that oh, so heavy S?

So I'm over here wondering why I was taught always add "'s" except when the noun ends in "s", then just add an apostrophe so the numerous S in a row aren't gumming up the works (reading Joss's makes me eyes hurt). Though I can see for clarity of the rule why the modern style just says add "'s" to everything to make it possessive.

I guess I'm saying the exceptions to those two rules above just look really odd to me. Grammar is used to denote the age of a historical figure? Grammar is influenced by spoken pronunciation that varies wildly?

I'm not sure if it's an American thing or an Emmie thing, but there's my curious thoughts.

[identity profile] rebcake.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
It might be an American thing, because I seem to be getting exercised about my gawd-given right to keep it simple and not go around adding apostrophes to every "s" I see, or putting an extraneous "u"in "color" and "labor". Actually, I find it quaint and charming to see the "u", but I like to keep my apostrophes strictly for possessives and contractions. Oh, do I love a good contraction!

And yes, the possessive of Joss is Joss', the possessive of Louis is Louis', and the plural is Josses and Louises. It doesn't matter if it's spelled the same as something else. We have lots of things in American-English that are spelled the same and pronounced differently. It's all part of our rugged appeal.

I would say my own personal rule is stay consistent, and keep it simple. Sometimes I fail. :(
Edited 2010-04-16 03:29 (UTC)

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
And yes, the possessive of Joss is Joss', the possessive of Louis is Louis', and the plural is Josses and Louises.

I am not alone!

We have lots of things in American-English that are spelled the same and pronounced differently. It's all part of our rugged appeal.

Indeed. :D

[identity profile] klme.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
Really? As in "Saint Lou-iss" rather than "Saint Lou-ee"? I'm amazed - I have always thought it was the latter. Isn't there a song about "Meet me in St Louis"? I'm sure I've always heard it sung as "Lou-ee"
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[personal profile] deird1 2010-04-16 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
(That's what I was thinking...)

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
Well, it's somewhat of a Southern thing to call St. Louis "Lou-ee" so the song might do that. Just like how New Orleans is pronounced "N'Awlins" more locally, where as I would say New "Or-leens" and then in France the end would be "Or-lay-ahn". But the general pronunciation is to pronounce the S. The silent S is still around, but it's not the most common pronunciation across the board in America. FWIW, people who live in St. Louis pronounce the S and say they can identify a foreigner if they pronounce it in the French manner.

Listening to the song again "Meet me in St. Louis", it's funny to note that "St." is still pronounced with the hard "t" when in French it would be "San Loo-ee". So, St. Louis still being pronounced with a silent S while the hard T has been adopted is just indicative of the word being stuck in evolution for a minority.

American English tends towards a more simplistic spelling style, but there's still relics of consonants never pronounced (knives with the silent K and gnats with a silent G), where as we remove what we see as superfluous U's and turn hard S's into Z's. Then we also have words borrowed from other languages where the foreign pronunciation is adopted by some. And then there's words like "ballet" and "fillet" with the silent "t" at the end. English is such a hodge podge of different languages--Latin, French, Anglo-Saxon--that I still find the idea of basing punctuation rules on pronunciation to be problematic.
Edited 2010-04-16 04:24 (UTC)
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[personal profile] deird1 2010-04-16 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
American English tends towards a more simplistic spelling style, but there's still relics of consonants never pronounced (knives with the silent K and gnats with a silent G) and then words borrowed from other languages where the foreign pronunciation is adopted by some.

Plus, you guys say "yuman" and "erbal" and "yumanity" rather than pronouncing the H like normal people. That weirds me out...

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
I agree about "erbal" and the "h" being silent, but I don't think "human" or "humanity" have a pure "y" sound instead of the "h". The soft "h" coming out as more of a "hyu" sound, but still significantly different to me than "yu". A different part of the back of the mouth is stressed to pronounce the two sounds. It's a subtle difference, but definitely not a "y". My tongue, mouth and throat understand the difference between a soft "h" and a hard "y". :P

Do the first syllables of "human" and "you" sound the same to you when Americans say it? That's interesting.
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[personal profile] deird1 2010-04-16 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
Do the first syllables of "human" and "you" sound the same to you when Americans say it? That's interesting.

Not the same, exactly. But if I was writing it out phonetically, I'd have to go with "yoo-man" rather than anything else.



(Someday, I'm so going to video myself demonstrating my normal accent and my fake British and American, so that I can actually discuss accents without resorting to really weird spellings.)

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
I think the soft "h" really is a "hyu" combo. You start off with the hard "ha" at the back-top of your throat and it rolls down into your tongue for the "yu" finish. Where as the "yu" just stays purely on the tongue and doesn't need any added push from the back of the throat.

And yes, I've been saying aloud "human" and "you" to feel the difference. :P

It reminds me of some German words that combine two consonant sounds in interesting ways for my American tongue.
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[personal profile] deird1 2010-04-16 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
*tries it out myself*

It feels like... well, like there's not a pronounced H, but that the space where the H should be is cancelling out the first bit of the Y - thus making it sound softer than a normal Y.


(Does that make sense?)

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure anymore. I'm too amused by the image of us "hu-hu-hu'ing" at our computer screens from opposite ends of the globe.


It feels like... well, like there's not a pronounced H, but that the space where the H should be is cancelling out the first bit of the Y - thus making it sound softer than a normal Y.

Wait, that does make sense. It's like you have the beginning of the H and the ending of the Y.
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[personal profile] deird1 2010-04-16 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
Woo! We make sense! *high-fives*

(Anonymous) 2010-04-16 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
Why not just solve the problem by saying, "The hat of Louis"? :p