Commentary - Small Spaces

So, I asked for fic commentary requests. (I’m still happy to do more, if anyone’s interested.)

This was written for lavastar, who requested a commentary for Small Spaces. You should probably read that before looking at this commentary.

The original fic still looks like it did, and my notes are the bits in blockquotes.

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Commentary - Waiting Game

So, I asked for fic commentary requests. (I’m still happy to do more, if anyone else wants to ask.)

This was written for lavastar, who requested a commentary for Waiting Game. You should probably read that before looking at this commentary.

The original fic still looks (almost) like it did, and my notes are the bits in blockquotes.

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