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Commentary - Not Yourself
Dec. 29th, 2009 10:32 amSo, I asked for fic commentary requests. (I’m still happy to do more, if you ask me for one.)
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dreamincolor, who requested a commentary for Not Yourself. You should probably read that before looking at this commentary.
The original fic still looks like it did, and my notes are the bits in blockquotes.
( commentary within )
This was written for
dreamincolor, who requested a commentary for Not Yourself. You should probably read that before looking at this commentary.The original fic still looks like it did, and my notes are the bits in blockquotes.
( commentary within )
