Oh, see, this is fun for being out of order, and also very, very annoying, because...come on! Although, really, he's totally going to agree somehow, so it's cool.
There were so many totally brilliant parts of this fic - I'm already convinced that this is gonna be one of your best fics yet, which is so exciting, especially since it's in your special OTP!
This section was totally adorable and hilarious and the Willow-babble was just right on:
“…you’ve liked Andrew?”
“Ack! No! Eww! – well, not ‘eww’, because that’d be… I mean he’s nice, and I’m sure you’ll… um… but no, I mean I’ve liked the people who aren’t the people you’d expect to be liking.”
The comparison to Willow/Kennedy was nice and fairly apt, and for some reason I just love that Dawn comes to Willow with this.
Dawn's explanation of why she likes him, and her monologue about what could go wrong, and Willow's ambiguous look, were all totally cool too.
Basically I cannot wait for more of this, and reading this has made me want to go back and read part 1 again, which means this is epically awesome.
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Date: 2010-02-09 12:42 am (UTC)There were so many totally brilliant parts of this fic - I'm already convinced that this is gonna be one of your best fics yet, which is so exciting, especially since it's in your special OTP!
This section was totally adorable and hilarious and the Willow-babble was just right on:
“…you’ve liked Andrew?”
“Ack! No! Eww! – well, not ‘eww’, because that’d be… I mean he’s nice, and I’m sure you’ll… um… but no, I mean I’ve liked the people who aren’t the people you’d expect to be liking.”
The comparison to Willow/Kennedy was nice and fairly apt, and for some reason I just love that Dawn comes to Willow with this.
Dawn's explanation of why she likes him, and her monologue about what could go wrong, and Willow's ambiguous look, were all totally cool too.
Basically I cannot wait for more of this, and reading this has made me want to go back and read part 1 again, which means this is epically awesome.