What really gave me the giggles: “An occasional ‘please’ or ‘thankyou’ wouldn’t hurt your case.” “Get knotted.” “Charming.”
A pause. “Please?” “No.”
I remember you mentioning some nervousness about writing Spike, but I really enjoyed the way you wrote him - and I'm a bit picky about people's interpretations of Spike. (“What’s the Sumerian word for ‘useless’?” just struck me as so..Spikey.) Giles’ dialog was also spot-on, not to mentinon damn funny.
You always do a such great job at painting a picture, without getting too wordy. Good work hon!
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Date: 2008-05-23 03:08 am (UTC)What really gave me the giggles:
“An occasional ‘please’ or ‘thankyou’ wouldn’t hurt your case.”
“Get knotted.”
“Charming.”
A pause.
“Please?”
“No.”
I remember you mentioning some nervousness about writing Spike, but I really enjoyed the way you wrote him - and I'm a bit picky about people's interpretations of Spike. (“What’s the Sumerian word for ‘useless’?” just struck me as so..Spikey.) Giles’ dialog was also spot-on, not to mentinon damn funny.
You always do a such great job at painting a picture, without getting too wordy. Good work hon!