deird_lj

So, I’ve been writing fic commentaries lately. And, on a whim, I decided to do another one.

This was written for my first fanfic, Dial N For Nancy-Boy. You should probably read that before looking at this commentary.

The original fic still looks like it did, and my notes are the bits in blockquotes.


( commentary under here )

So, I asked for fic commentary and drabble requests. (Still happy to do more if anyone wants to make a suggestion.)

This one was written for louise39, who requested a commentary for Future Echoes. You should probably read that before looking at this commentary.

The original fic still looks like it did, and my notes are the bits in blockquotes.

( commentary within )